the worker bee ([info]d_r_o_n_e) wrote in [info]pirates500,
Title: eye of the needle
Author: ladybee ([info]d_r_o_n_e)
E-mail: d_r_o_n_e @ livejournal . com
Fandom: PotC
Rating/Classification: PG--sexual overtones about Jack
Disclaimer: Disney's characters, i make no money from this crap.
Archive: Feel free to comment and ask, the answer will probably be "yes."
Summary: Crossposted to [info]pirategasm, written for the [info]pirates500 "Unfulfilled Longing" challenge. 500 words exactly. Where *did* Jack get that compass, and what made it work?



It began ten years past, it had, when her dashing beloved mad Captain Jack Sparrow took a piece of her away.

He’d been kind, he’d been gentle...hadn’t hurt her. She hadn’t bled; indeed she didn’t know if she was capable of bleeding--she presumed not since she hadn’t by now. He’d whispered to her softly, firm, with a sure hand, murmuring his love for her and how it would never die. He swore to her he’d take her to the edges of the earth and back again, across every sea to every land he could find, as his deft fingers brushed against her softly, shudderingly... He didn’t want to hurt her, he said, but it was just that he needed to do this this and do it he did, and good lord it was all just a dull ache now yet somehow still as fresh as yesterday’s wound.

And later, she didn’t understand why but he was gone. Gone and taken that piece of her that would always be his, because she’d given it to him freely, because there’d been no other choice and it had been hers to give and his to take. And now she felt it, every white hot second of every scorching Caribbean day and every aching black hour of every sultry tropical night--the piece he’d taken called to her, drove her mad with yearning, not sure if she wanted him to return to her or just give the piece of herself back he’d taken. She had a dull suspicion they were one and the same.

And after ten years of thirst for the heady rare liquor that was her dashing beloved mad Captain Jack Sparrow, she felt a stirring. A low primal sense of reunion. Could it be he was returning, coming back to her to make good on his promises, to slake her parched depths with the liquid rolling flow of his body on her, in her, beside her, astride her...? The more she considered, the more she felt it must be true. The pull of her severed self was so strong it screamed to her on the headwinds of the storm that blew him from wherever he was back to her side. And suddenly...he was there.

Oh, he was back, and ready to fight for her, Jack was. And he brought with him all the madness and pain and wounds and glory and lust and hatred and screaming beautiful glorious delirium she knew from ten years past. And when it was over, he was back where he belonged, his hands so sure and loving and the piece of her he’d taken away returned and so near that it didn’t matter if it weren’t put right back where he got it. His familiar rugged hand slid along the arch of her wheel as he murmured, “Now bring me that horizon.”

He was hers, this man, this skin and bones and blood and hair--that was what a man meant...but her Jack, what he really was...was freedom.

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[info]circe_tigana

July 26 2003, 09:26:01 UTC 8 years ago

Your PotC fic has been wonderful, and this was the best I've seen yet. Amazing.

Thank you. I am going to pimp you in my journal :)

[info]circe_tigana

July 26 2003, 09:34:32 UTC 8 years ago

Have pimped. :)

And friended, too, because I just discovered that you are All.About.China Mieville! and my love for his universe knows no bounds!

[info]d_r_o_n_e

July 26 2003, 09:47:03 UTC 8 years ago

Thank you! I woke up with this idea in my head and sat down and had to spew it out before even having my coffee. Now that's inspiration!

Also, i see you are a Mieville fan too! Hooray for Armada the floating pirate city! :D

[info]circe_tigana

July 26 2003, 10:04:36 UTC 8 years ago

I am a massive fan of Armada, and awe of its brilliance, especially of its politics.

The characters in The Scar (and I'm including Armada as a character!) blew my mind.

[info]magicspromise

July 26 2003, 10:58:52 UTC 8 years ago

This is awesome.
That is all.
Oh, and thank you!^^

[info]tigs

July 26 2003, 11:37:36 UTC 8 years ago

That was beautiful.º

[info]rhapsody

July 26 2003, 11:59:20 UTC 8 years ago

Wow this was good and very creative

[info]rashaka

July 26 2003, 15:09:18 UTC 8 years ago

Jack/Ship. It's the ship of ships. The OTP. :)

[info]bizarra

July 26 2003, 18:44:24 UTC 8 years ago

Oh, wow... this was really good! My compliments to you!

[info]randombtchchick

July 26 2003, 18:55:15 UTC 8 years ago

That was so well written. I loved it. Your beginning pulls the reader right in. Utterly fabulous.

[info]wrenlet

July 27 2003, 13:12:04 UTC 8 years ago

*adores* *pimps*

[info]callmespike

July 28 2003, 00:05:57 UTC 8 years ago

I'm beginning to think you're one of those unfairly talented people. We can't have that, now can we?
*grin* This piece is lovely. I can't think of a single thing that doesn't work.
-Liz

[info]ltbloodrose

August 4 2003, 11:27:27 UTC 8 years ago

OMG brilliant!!! Goes right with my most recent post re: Jack's one true love...

Anonymous

September 28 2003, 19:10:46 UTC 8 years ago

can just say please,please keep on writig..it is wonderfull...i can see,hear and nearly feel jack through your words.
i have read the 3 storys how he get his beads in his hair...love them so mouch too...cause the really meet the caracter.

(plese excuse my bad english)

mel

[info]bathsweaver

February 10 2004, 04:02:15 UTC 8 years ago

Oh my.

I just read this (got here a little late). Lovely, lovely. Thank you, thank you for writing this. Especially loved this line: The pull of her severed self was so strong it screamed to her on the headwinds of the storm.

It screamed to her.

That's beautiful. Love the image I have of Jack flying to her so fast that you can hear it on the wind. Oh, oh your words are so lovely I can't express it.

Am pimping this, oh yes I am. Thank you, thank you again, for writing.

[info]erinrua

May 5 2004, 19:56:03 UTC 8 years ago

Pimpety pimp pimp ....

Ahoy there, mate! :-)

If you will permit me, I am joining in the pimp-parade for your wonderful writing. I have included links to this incredible piece and your wonderful "Salt, the Content of My Heart" on my PoTC recommendations page at <href="http://captainjack.t35.com/fanfic.html>http://captainjack.t35.com/FanFic.html</a>. (Which works when the ruddy server is not taking a powder.)

If for any reason you don't wish them linked there, just shout and I'll remove them. But this is such gorgeous, poetical, haunting, lovely stuff that I just wanted to share the wealth! Well done, mate! :-)
Cheers ~

Erin

[info]watersword

June 13 2006, 21:53:00 UTC 5 years ago

God, I love this kind of thing, where the Pearl is just as fierce and intelligent as her captain. Thank you for this.

[info]mynxii

November 4 2006, 03:28:38 UTC 5 years ago

Incredible - loved it.
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